KaiTheGreater

Hi! RoseAndThorn here to review this piece! Okay, so first, I think you have a very good grasp on imagery. I absolutely loved what you did in the first stanza. ...

I really love this, it's amazing. I especially love how it portrays the startling perception children tend to have of the world around them. Although, I think in some places, ...

Hello! So I'm going to attempt to review this lovely piece today, although I'm not very good at reviewing. Let's see... My overall impression was that it seemed kind of ...

Hello, AllisontheWriter, and a very merry April Fool's Day to you to! :p Really fantastic song here. I figured since this is a joke, why not have a part in ...

;-; WHAT Just read the entire thing in one sitting. I don't think I've ever reviewed a novel before, but here we goes- First of all, there were lots of ...

Hello, MadWriter! And wow, really great poem! :) There was a very clear portrayal of the narrator's sentiment, the message was entirely cohesive, and you had a great use of ...

Hello Hanzel, This was an incredibly powerful story. You have an amazing talent here, and I truly hope you continue to use and develop it. There were a few grammatical ...

I just have to tell you that this is quite possibly the best story I have ever read. You have incredible writing talent, and I envy you that. Quite honestly, ...

'Ello there, Snazzy! *waves* First off, I absolutely adore your username. I mean, really, who wouldn't want to be a SnazzyPencil, right? Especially a SnazzyPencil with a shiny cat. Anyway, ...

Hello, Firelight! I guess it's a little late for this, but welcome to YWS anyway! :) Okay, business time. First of all, I like the theme of this poem, but ...

It's four in the morning, I'm exhausted, and I have a terrible headache. I'm sorry to say that at this particular time I have not the time, the energy nor ...

Okay, so I found this poem to be slightly disturbing and perhaps a tad bit freakishly heart-stopping, with the result of a severe loss of sleep, increased levels of paranoia ...

Oh. My. Gosh. You seriously just described something that happened to me recently, like, exactly. Is this even possible? You have a beautiful way with words. It's amazing how you ...

Great poem! I love it. :) One suggestion, though- In fiction the dragons are slain, And the beautiful princess is rescued, In reality the princess doesn't believe she's beautiful, She's ...

Hey! DragonLily here to review! :) I haven't read the beginning of this story yet, but I think I might want to now! I like the whole idea behind this ...