Kagi

You might want to re-think this. It was almost like a PM not a story. Keep working on it kaka

Well done, you really know how to capture a scene, maybe write another chapter bout what led her to her sucide. I would love to read more-you got talent!! Keep ...

Ok.. I'm kind of in a pot hole with this story :( Inspiration!!! Anyhow thanks.. Kaka x

Thank you very much everyone! I like writing it!! Aprreciated.. *Hugs* Kaka x

Kay thanks!! I know I have barely any reviews but thanks anyway.. I really appreciated your review but I'd like to point oh (nicely :D ) Thant I kind of ...

THIS IS SO GOOD. IT IS FANTASTIC. SO MOVING AND TOUCHING. YOU HAVE RAW TALENT. THIS STORY IS FIT FOR BOOKSHOPS. KEEP WRITING NO MATTER WHAT. CAN'T WAIT TO READ ...

Im kaka and I am going to reveiw for you today. :D I felt like I had just been shot. The world shattered around me as I read her lips ...

Im kaka and I am going to reveiw for you today. :D I felt like I had just been shot. The world shattered around me as I read her lips ...

Hope you like this guys. My first ever fantasy story. Kaka x

I enjoyed writing this guys.. Should I write more.. I'm not sure if it has a good enough ending.. Thanks guys.. Kaka

Thanks for reviewing. Helped me and I made the changes. I'll write more soon. Kaka xx

Wow.. I really liked this. Great work. Kept me reading kaka

Thanks for reviewing anyway guys.. This is my first ever poem! I'll kelp workin on it!! Thanks kaka x

This is a fantastic poem well written with a sense of lonliness. You can sense the kids wonderment.. why isn't Daddy looking at me?! Very well written and to be ...

Okay thanks guys. I made some changes (AGAIN!! :D) Anyway, I think I'm done with this story the end has happened.. You know TIME TO MOVE ON PEOPLE!! Haha.. but ...