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Re: One of Them
Ah Aliza! Here on request.. I am going to be especially mean as I submitted my entry for the competition a couple of days ago! Mhaw ha ha haaah! ;D ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Religious Duty
This is really really good. It was heartfelt, passionate and really moving. One thing, when posting stories that include religion make sure you don't imply anything that could cause offense. ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: The 1911 Triangle Tragedy ^^Part 4
Day. I'm crying. I want to scream. Oh those poor people. I want to do something right now. I want to go to that grave and pay my respects. Yes ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: The 1911 Triangle Tragedy ^^Part 2
OH.MY.GOODNESS. The plot just became a plot. This is real. I'm sorry this can't be a really long review or anything as I must make haste and charge toward part ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: The 1911 Triangle Tragedy ^^Part 1
Ahh day.Another great peice. Somehow even though I detest with a passion historical stories I knew I would enjoy this simply because it is yours. Well all I can say ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Becoming a Teenager
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!! This is breathtakingly amazing. I've never read anything so passionate and true and so real. It flowed awesomely and I am so utterly speechless. Trust me, read other
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Doing Well (Contest Entry)
Not what I expected at all. Not once on this site have I read something form a dogs perspective. Interesting! xD Again I did not find any errors or grammatical ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Knots. Prelude, Pt. 1
I'm here! So the story. To date, I have only ever read your poems (I think) Now, I know its been far too long because this piece is breathtaking! Your ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Sarah
From a perspective of a big sister you make me want to cry, sob. This was heartbreaking. I wish I felt like that about my baby sister. I do, well ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Staying Down
Ah Razi! This is soo.. beautiful. It was really touching. I did actually sing it the whole way through and my parents wounldn't have thanked you! xD The lyrics were ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Thorns & Roses [1.1]
Hey pink! I'll deff. join the page after this review! Its excellent, behind you all the way xD So my notes and corrections are in red. I'll do my best ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Charlie and Logan- Chapter 4
Here to reveiew for you Luxy.Couldn't wait! I have to admit I was disappointed we weren't goin to go forward with the plot! I was so physched about the baby! ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter 4 [Snowflake]
Another fab chapter. I loved the visions/dreams she had. You used such pulling and powerful imagery. I was there. But Jashy? *Whimpers* Please don't make Chase die. Too sad. No ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter 3 [Sunshine]
And the reviews go on and on and on and onnnn!!! Wow. Just read my first review again Jash. This is just as good, better even! Really had me pulled ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter I
Jash here at last. Its been too long I know. By accident, I watched the trailer first and now.. I'm hooked. The locket creeped my out. Are you the phtographer ...
Dec 30, 2010
