Kagi

Woah.. There's a writer in the house! :) I really liked this! I have absolutely NOTHING WRONG WITH IT! I only think that MOST stories always end kind of happy ...

Kieran held Charlotte delicately in his strong arms, his heart beating as hard as hers as they kissed. Six years and they had gone with only a few minor fights ...

Day One, I had gone to camp for the past three years, so the first day I saw you that year, I didn't think anything of it. You were pastors ...

Enjoyed the story and the charchters. Above all I felt this was quite blunt. I can realate to it tho-I mean you see the guy,the guy with the smirk,with the ...

Wow! Now that I have stopped reading this I actually realise that no,I'm not watching that all happen but yeah,I'm still here at my computer. Seriously-I have no clue what ...

OKay.. I agree! This is soooooooooooooo not romance. It should be in Death curdling scariness!! I'm terrifed-Gunna have nightmares. You really need to edit this. My hands thightened thier grip, ...

She is beautiful. Her pale green eyes full of passion every time she kissed him. Her light brown hair tied into an elegant plait , strands falling into front of ...

This was just about as good as it gets.. I'm mad about your story! I don't have anythign to nitpick out of your story. It was quirk-less. You are a ...

Okay.. I'm going to be honest.. I didn't really liked. I felt that it was rushed.. I felt that it didn't have enough description and I didn't like how the ...

Good story and a good healthy read for anyone who loves reading. However I have some nitpicks with your story.. First, I don't think it should be in Romantic short ...

Okay.. This story was well written, it had excellent structure and to be honest, I really really loved it. It is a perfect romantic short story. I enjoyed your characters ...

Whimer.. I like August?! OKay.. This story scared me.. Really scared me.. August can't be that bad. I liked your writing though.. I want to read another one of your ...

Okay.. This.. was..um interesting? I don't really know.. I mean I didn't really feel your story.. I'm not sixteen but it all felt the same you know?! Most teens in ...

Just before I say anything else.. PLEASE FINISH THIS.. IM DYING TO READ MORE!! :D So.. The only thing along with the others is that teen court isn't very realistic ...

To be honest.. I felt that this story.. was GOOD!!! But could be better.. :P I mean.. its in romantic short stories.. So we need a little more romancce-get me?! ...