Kaedee

But the more that I think about it, Twilight is actually pretty bad. Bad fad. (Ooh, that rhymes!) ~KD

This is my favorite out of all of yours. ~KD

Hi, SnoM, I'm Kaedee. Welcome to YWS! I've got a question...shouldn't this be rated 16+? ~KD

Thanks for the feedback! Looking over my piece again to edit. ~KD

Thanks for the feedback. As I said before, I know what you guys mean. The girl's mom is dead, but I'm planning for the girl to find her dad one ...

Thanks for the review! Totally know what you mean about not 'going down a path of cliches' with this orphan story. It'll be different than most, I promise you! :) ...

“Clustered in and around Saint Mark's Square are the most famous buildings of Venice. The Bell tour is one of them. During the day, St. Mark's Square is filled with ...

Sorry about that! I meant, who is talking here: In Rome there’s the Colosseum! The Colosseum is so interesting it has so much history in its architecture. The Colosseum (Colosseo) ...

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it! It's great to know that you're still following, and my story hasn't gotten boring. Yet. Hopefully never, though. Maybe sometime I can ...

Nice! =D the Dumbledore and dance the hippogriff!' ~KD

Oh, that's not what I meant! Sorry about that. I was talking about the word 'girliest'...yep, I don't think many people these days smear their lips with blood! :P ~KD

Hehe...I love it! :) ~KD

I'll show you exactly how to fix it later, but I gotta go now. By the way, could you tell me who is talking when? That way it will be ...

Thanks for the critiques...you found some things that I wouldn't see without some help! I fixed the confusing king part. At least I thought I did. :) ~Kaedee

Nice job! This story was very well written, and interesting. I loved the man's accent and dialogue, which shows quite a lot about him. Keep on writing- Kaedee