Kaedee

Hey, mminc13...welcome to YWS! I'm Kaedee, and I'll be reviewing your story today. First of all, I was sold as soon as I heard this line: The aliens have been ...

Hey. I'm Kaedee, here to review! This story reminds me of one that I had begun to write, then dropped. I think I will revive it again! Maybe I should ...

Yes, I'm back! You did a great job once again. *clicks Like button* I liked the way you described the part where the MC notices his amazing (may I call ...

Hey, Pooja! I read your story the first time before it was edited, and didn't review since everybody got the main problems. First of all, this fixed chapter is written ...

Hey, Kanen. You did a great job with this story (Chapter 1). I was sucked in by the first sentence. Even in only a few paragraphs, I was already getting ...

Hi, MegaLizardLord! Welcome to YWS. Let's start with the good things about your story. You have a very interesting idea for the setting of your story; an island filled with ...

Hey! This story definitely has promise. You did a great job with the first few sentences; they suck you into the story, and make you very curious about what is ...

Hey, Aries. The setting of your story is very interesting...especially the part about the orc camps. You did a pretty good job. Here are some corrections for you: Dobliv entered ...

You did a great job. The story was captivating. You were very descriptive. I found it hard to find any problems; the ones I found are mostly more minor. Corrections ...

Hey! The beginning of the story kept my attention. I enjoyed the narrator's (Elena) voice. Corrections: I found words such as 'headlock', 'staircase', and 'downstairs' that you wrote as separate ...