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Haha, thank you. I do have a bit of a problem switching up my past and present tenses. It is something I need to get better at %uD83D%uDE2D I will ...

Aw, I have never thought of all of those who don't have older siblings, mostly because I am the middle child, but I can see where you are coming from. ...

Hey Fleur!! Ohhhh I never thought of adding a contrast stanza. That sounds quite nice actually. I will have to add on a little bit. Thank you for the suggestion!~

Hey Ellie, thank you for the review!!

Hey! Yes I was trying to describe the love through imagery within nature. I am not sure I got the point across all the way but i am glad you ...

Aww, thank you!

Wow. This poem really tugged on my heart strings 😭

Ty for the review!!

Aw, thank you! (:

Hey there, thank you for the review! You%u2019re right about the %u2018and%u2019. Now that I go back and re read that part it can do without. Thanks for the suggestion~

Hey Inferno! Thank you for your feedback! I was really wondering if I should combine the two last sentences so it would make all of them 7 lines; But i ...

Hey Ellie, thank you for the review. Yes, I always struggle with finding rhyming words haha. It's something I need to work on some more....

Hey Coffee! Haha your review could be an actual story itself. I was writing about the time I had left until I can move out of a toxic household... But ...

Hey! Thanks for the review%u2026 I get what you mean that my plot is quickly resolved. I had actually written it as poem before, so when I was changing the ...