KNS012

i know it would probably be better if i don't comment because i'm not much help....but this poem didn't strike any emotion for me. that's just my opinion though. but ...

wow.........that was AWESOME!!!! but i was a bit confused here And bringing out products that on close inspection. it jus didn't fit to me. but i think you did great ...

it was really good, i loved it! keep writing oh nd there were a few errors that i caught,here.... through your mind like and aimless bird ( and should be ...