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Veracell: I really don't appreciate you being so immature. And to think, I'm the same age as you! Or rather, YOU'RE the same age as ME, considering I've seemed to ...

Esmé: Again, another great review from you. I'd actually been thinking about the leadership thing, and the fact that you pointed it out only urges me to fix that little ...

Iya: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I will take your advice aout adding more tension to the escape, and patch up the only-one-guard thing. When you mentioned that, it ...

All three of these quotes have the same thing in common. When you first started out, her hand went through everybody and she could walk through walls, and all that ...

Wow, thanks :) I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for keeping up with this, Angel :) And thanks for the compliments lol. They certainly don't hurt.

Mostly repeat everything I said in Part One, minus the thing about sex. That was very sad and well done, by the way. I felt bad for the MC. You ...

I just wanted to thank you all for your fabulous reviews. And I have every intention of actually FINISHING this novel. Chap. 3 is now up, for all who care ...

*Note* Has been newly edited. I attempted to describe setting and family better. Hope it improves :)

Thanks, everyone, for your reviews. They are highly appreciated. And to anyone who wishes to continue reading, Chap. 2 is now up. I have already made the recommended changes. I ...

Anytime :) Anyway, I still owe you. So PM me for a critique whenever there's a need.

Ash - much better, and not just because you aren't using my idea anymore lol. I actually think they look and sound better. Keep writing. ANd don't worry, I will ...

*gasp* you like edward more than IAN? Are you INSANE? :( Ian is the most amazing unreal guy EVER. If only he were real. I would leave Edward in the ...

Thanks a ton :) I just realized that you're new here on YWS. Just wanted to say welcome, and I hope you benefit from the site. (I know I have.) ...