KJ

CHAPTER FIVE: Way too may pronouns again. Use ISAAC'S NAME! I didn't notice anything else; I'm really tired. But I still wish that Carmen loved Sophia... stupid Nora... I hope ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys. And the compliments :) Chap. 5 will probably be up tomorrow, if you're interested.

Mental note, KJ - get back to this. Ash, PM me if I forget?

Wow, thanks you guys :oops: I'm glad I've finally written something that everyone seems to like. I'll take the - well, very few, which is a good thing I guess ...

Yes, the ending was unexpected. And yes, I too had to get used to it, and decide whether or not I liked it. But now I do. I'm the kind ...

Yes, that I did. I LOVED Prom Night. I wanted to write a different version, but along the same lines. Anyway, can't wait to see you tonight! Maybe we could ...

The promised critique. Sorry it took so long. “Alright, alright, I’m coming!” Should be all right . “I think so,” she smiled mischievously. Can't smile words. Period instead of comma. ...

It doesn't suck! I don't think you should give up on it. I said I liked it :) It just needs some work...

Mor and Ash - Thanks for your reviews. I'm afraid it's getting boring or something, because less people are critiquing :( I'll make the suggested changes ASAP. Not now, because ...

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Angel and Moonlight: Thanks a ton for reading. I'm glad you like it :) And Angel, I understand. Thanks for letting me know. Moonlight, next chapter in BSBM will be ...

*Edited* Again, I took everyone's suggestions into consideration.