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Singer: Thanks for reading :) I'm glad you like it, and thanks for your comments. Actually, you're not supose dto knwo what the kids are whispering about - you'll fin ...

Tatra: Thanks a lot for the past two reviews. They were excellent, and you made some good points :) Hope you enjoy the rest.

It’s odd; I find it easy to remember the planes and angles of his face, and the deep timbre of his voice, but can’t quite recall the vivid memory of ...

*Edited yet again* Thank you for the top-notch suggestions :)

*Edited yet again* Thanks for all suggestions, people :)

*Edited yet again* I took your excellent suggestions into consideration, JC, and added a few of my own changes. Much thanks. And thank you to everyone else who is following ...

Sorry :roll: Didn't mean to embarass y'all

JC: Thanks for your helpful review. It was kind, constructive, and was complimentary at the same time, and I haven't had one of those for a while, so thanks again. ...

Need to watch your tenses. You switch back and forth between the two. I'll be back to work on this critique in a bit.

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Miked: Thanks for the pointers. You've been really helpful; I never would have caught all of that :) Also, to your last comment, about me calling them all male/female vampyres? ...

Mnesomeye: Unfortunately, this story does not end entirely happy. So if you like happy endings... that sucks :( And I'll have to check out that book. Thanks for the recommendation. ...

Venom, Moon, and Angel: Thanks for reading. You guys are amazing. When I'm editing, I'll take all suggestions into consideration. Next chapter along... probably in a few days, if I ...

Awww, thanks you guys :) Your critiques are, as always, very helpful and much-appreciated. As to the next chapter... no idea. Really. I'm swamped with schoolwork and attempting to boost ...

I printed all of this out, and I'll give you a scan review later, promise, Anna :)