KJ

I really liked this. What I liked most was your hook. I didn't have time to read it all - maybe you should shorten it? Just a thought. Don't have ...

I like to know what it going on in a story before giving an opinion. So I really can't on this. It was unclear and vague. If you meant it ...

To be honest, I didn't really like it. I found it mostly dull, and nothing struck me about it. The biggest problem I had with it was your beginning - ...

It was interesting. A pretty intriguing start. You NEED spacing, badly. Have no more time to say anything else, but I did like it.

I really have nothing negative to say and everyone else covered the critiques. So here's what I have to say: I liked your descriptions, a lot. Keep writing.

Need spacing. I can't read anything this clumped together.

Hello. Very creative, I have to say. However, I felt that it was a bit confusing. I also felt that there were too many loose ends - of course you ...

You did it again. I loved it. Can't wait for the next one. Get writing so I don't have to! =P

I like this. Interesting ideas. Very bittersweet. The only thing I did not like was the whole black-and-white thing. I felt that it took away from the story.

Samuel Garrison - Those are some excellent points. Thanks. I'll get to work on them soon. As to a question and a statement you made: Was Alpha Six a real ...

Need spacing. I thought that this was... interesting. But you give us a bit too much of an info dump right in the beginning - at least that's how I ...

Hey. Yeah, great job with editing. I read the whole thing. Overall impression: It wasn't bad. Interesting. I liked the wry tone you had throughout it, and you were consistent ...

Very compelling read. Sureal has the real critique down, so I won't bother. It wasn't exciting, but it was, as I said, compelling. Keep writing.

Hello. This was very amusing. What captured me was your title. For some reason I thought it captivating... Anyway, good job on the comic. Keep writing.

Maybe it was just me, but I would have liekd it better if you had used the word 'ice' only once. Other than that, I liked it. Wasn't bad.