KJ

Have yet again re-downloaded. 3rd (for you) version of this chapter. I've shortened it up, for those of you who hated the length Description: Takes place in London, around 1845. ...

Newly edited

Newly edited. Need honest opinions. And yes, it is long. But mind you, not as long as it was.

Again, newly edited. I hope you appreciate all this work I'm doing ;P

This is actually one of my favorite chapters because, in my opinion, it's when things begin to get more exciting. There's a huge twist of plot that anyone who's read ...

Detail: While I've edited it, I still feel that this is an extremely rough chapter. I found it difficult to write. I wanted to keep it entertaining and yet give ...

Okay, I am warning you in ADVANCE - it is LONG. And hopefully you like that, because I know you never want it to end, right? RIGHT? By the way... ...

I know, it only took months. Hope you like the addition.

Hope you like it - it's rough, keep in mind.

I don't know if this is just me, but I feel like the story is going all over the place. I don't know.

Those of you who know my work, you'll recognize this as a shortened version of Needles and Roses (already posted in Advanced Critiques). Yes, I changed the title - I ...

Moon, since you're the only one left following this, this is for you! Better like it