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This is one hell of a powerful writing. It is not an easy job to show the horror of what a suicidal person might going through. You did it just ...

Concept is interesting and worth exploring, the process of finding new friends after being lonely, that the main character goes through in the first paragraph is very common and a ...

I see you are fond of short sentences, it is said that short three words can say much more than long, complex sentences, if used right that is. I do, ...

Why are your paragraphs so short? It may be your style, I just find it a little bit annoying. you have misspelled quite a few word here. The Germen Shepered ...