Justlittleoleme

I love the meaning of it. I certainly understand the idea pretended mutness to burning words and blindness to their pain. Though google translate butchered it a bit I certainly ...

XD sorry about that, its seems to be a habit of mine when writing. The more emotion I feel the more punctuation...not really sure why >.> , though I can ...

XD Thanks for all the positive reviews guys! It makes me feel a thousand time cheerier :D O.o Bad form mista duck, bad form! (waggles finger in a chastising fashion) ...

hmmmm...I made a few of the changes you suggested. Its seemed to help it a lot as far as flow...but somehow it still seems a little awkward to me...meh, I ...

Thanks sooo much for the review! It encouraged me to finish it instead of being lazy and letting it end with a silly awkward end rhyme...I hope this version is ...

Thanks guys XD

Thanks for the review Jash! XD I made the appropriate changes, though I kept the ellipsis since to me it indicates thought and the title is a thoughtful one...I'm not ...

Thanks a million for the review! Though I have to admit that I am without doubt, a free verse girl, there will be times when I break down and write ...

ohhhh, now I is funny how the way we word things can change our meanings so much...I guess that's something I haven't thought about much my self...what was really bothering ...

Thanks for the review Zoomie! I will admit, I made the story vague on purpose...however I'm starting to think that I made it just a little more vague than I ...

Thanks so much, I'm actually a little relieved that somebody liked it. I don't really consider myself even remotely poetic, I'm more about descriptive writing, but there are those times ...

I can say honestly that I liked this poem a lot, the meaning of it is very honest and true, It even made me tear up a bit...

XD Thanks sooo much guys! I'm glad you liked it...I will eventually finish, I'm just kinda stuck on how the next scene should go...sort of a writers block kinda deal, ...

Thanks Charcoalspacewolfman XD I'm glad to here that it was an improvement! My confidence has been successfully restored! To be truthful, I actually enjoyed writing this version. I spent much ...

Thanks so much for your review! I realize the awkward sentence structure is just the tip of the ice burg with the problems this story has. I'm very embarrassed for ...