JustisMarez

This was funny, and cute. I liked it. Skin already got I think most of the stuff I was looking at. Incorrect things. I think. “Would you stop!” Amber glared ...

This was amazing; again. I loved it and it flowed with the first part. I didn't find any errors while reading it so, nothing really negative to say. I'm jealous!(: ...

I liked this. But...Peter sounds sorta like a whimp to be honest. Elijah on the other hand is this down in the dumps guy, with a happy go lucky friend. ...

First, this was very short. Check your punctuation, since it's a girl...you might want to put in more description. "They're not suppose to be home yet. You should put in ...

Hey Isha! It's Justis here, from chat! I just so happened to stumble upon your story. I really liked this, the hole Lady Gaga part made me laugh. I agree ...

I really liked that. Love the discription you put in it. I can't wait to read chapter two! They you are presented with wings. Um, I think you ment to ...

Wow...this was truly amazing. I loved it! (: The way you wrote - typed - was pretty great. Your really good and I hope you continue writing. I loved the ...

I really like this, its truely Beautiful. Its kind of sad though. But I still liked it. You did a wonderful job. Don't stop. You should try and make oh ...

This was very beautiful. I actually loved it. I love how you made that cloud so inspiring. Ha I liked how at the end, you decided not to take your ...

When you get finished writing for the day make sure to use spell check and carefully read over it. I spotted a mistake, at the beginning. You said the cold ...