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Re: Too old for a hero
For a short poem, this honestly kind of hits home for me. I feel like I'm always having the internal battle about whether to stand up for myself or others. ...
Jun 28, 2025 -
Re: The Divers (Chapter One)
First thing that came to mind was the formatting of your sentences. I noticed in reviews from the prologue that someone had mentioned your run on sentences. I feel those ...
Jun 28, 2025 -
Re: The Divers (Prologue)
Interesting so far. I've always been a fan of works in both literature and cinema that have to do with the ocean and being stranded. I find it valuable that ...
Jun 28, 2025 -
Re: I Don't Want to be perfectt....
This is a beautiful piece of poetry. I'm not a poet myself, nor have I have ever been a dan of poetry, so it's possible my words to you mean ...
Dec 26, 2024 -
Re: The Wicked Whisper
This was quite the spine tingling tale. I could feel the words painting a picture in my mind and I was quite impressed. I feel that this story is quite ...
Nov 20, 2024 -
Re: The Keeper Of The Vineyard
I love the imagery that you use in this writing. Honestly, you used a few words that I had to look up so I give you kudos for that. It ...
Nov 19, 2024
