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It was one of those moments when your stomach dives, plummeting for what seems like an eternity. During my years of service to my country, I witnessed the atrocities that ...

And no one thought it would end like this. This line kind of breaks up the flow... The word 'thought' is so bulky. But one day the light burnt me ...

I’ve seen your face In an old picture, And maybe in a dream or two. Great start ;) Dances of the sparks , Although Kitten didn't understand this line I ...

They meet in a small, sunny café above the metro station ; t he city moving around them. They stare at each other before the one on the left, the ...

So, since everyone else has already said everything and edited and stuff for this nice poem I'll just... Um. Anyways, I really liked this. I think you had pretty good ...

Wow, this is great. Really I don't have anything in the poem itself to point out but I'm going to review it's characteristics and stuff (if you know what I ...

Hey there, I really liked this! Still there are people who live like kings . They are the kings of selfishness , The kings of pride . And I am ...

Out of phobia - A phobia of death; Of silence. Loved these lines. Do not be silent. Great ending! Simile Is a kind of random and short poem. It's like ...

Hiya there, Volfness, So, so , sorry I couldn't get to this sooner. With me starting up school and cross country running season my life has been quite hectic with ...

Assigned to our grouping was the young man was stood before me. He possessed somewhat girlish features: a slight nose, rounded lips, and an oval face. It was chillingly cold ...

Hm... I WANNA READ IT! Now I can't WAIT to read it for my English class (well, not really my English class, my dad is making me read classic books... ...

I was working up on the 88th floor; only one or two floor s below where the plane crashed. Not long after, we had an at least fifty person long ...

Hi there Volf, glad to see you're gettin' around the site well! ;) By those shameless creatures. This line is a little vague. It took me two readings to understand ...

Hi there Ignatius, here to review! *Salute* Did you call your loved ones to see if they were OK? This is a kind of weak line. 'OK' is a very ...

BLACK DEATH 1347 , 25th November Dear D iary , My name is Adam Hughs I am 53 years old, I know that I haven't got long left until I ...