Justagirl

O pen your mind, explore . S ee for the first time since you were blind , don't let any thing stop you . L et your mind fly . ...

This was the one guy I had come to love and it wasn't as if it had been a couple of weeks- w e had grown up together. I stuttered ...

Why is “I love you” so hard to say? That's a good question... When three simple words Could change or save a life, It could stop all hate, And put ...

He will be drawn no mercy out of him, This line's wording confuses me. Singing like a demon of satanic hymn. I like this line, it's nicely sinister :twisted: He ...

Interesting poem. It doesn't really grab me though. I don't really understand it - it's a little confusing, is it from the horse's point of view the whole time? Also ...

I'd like the memory of me to be a happy one . I'd like to leave an afterglow of smiles when life is done . I'd like to leave an ...

Beautiful, your face I find. Here, stuck in my mind. Making my heart twist and bind. See... inside your name is signed. This line is a little weird, it doesn't ...

When your world is crashing around you, Someone you think may never accept you, Gives you the hope you have been longing for , For when you think of the ...

I'm more of a story teller kind of person, rather than a poet, but I had a few poems taking space on my computer desktop. I thought I might throw ...

I think I'm starting to be a poet, and this is the start of my line of poetry. Please be honest and tell me what you think, but too harsh ...

This is a really cool piece, you HAVE to write more :)! Not particularly about time or anything, this piece is perfect length the way it is. But write other ...

This is for Trident's Three-Pronged Contest. My things to incorporate are a) a lawn gnome, b) duct-taping an article of clothing, and c) a silver penny. Critique as harsh as ...

NOTE: I had to write this for APLangComp and the ending was rushed because I ran out of time. It ended up being icky and not the way I wanted ...

Hi there!! I've never edited a poem before but I love to write them so I thought I'd give it a try on your poem. Here I go! T he ...

Before I go to work I want to tell you that everbody's works that are on here are WONDERFUL!! You are not an exeption. Don't worry. Now - on to ...