JustJasper

Thank you!

Thanks for the review!

I was not thinking that you would actually use the paragraph I wrote and I am well aware that it was cliche. I was just trying to demonstrate how being ...

Thanks for the review! I will definitely try to work on those things you mentioned (especially in the storybook). I will be sure to tell you when I post the ...

Thanks for reviewing! You weren't rude at all!

Thanks for the review! I knew that one sentence was choppy but I wasn't sure how to fix it. Thanks for all of your help!

Not directly related to the flash but yes same city

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"He went home from work the night before he gets paid, and rejoiced. He made himself a nice dinner and treated himself to a drink. Thomas was really excited, and ...

"He went home from work the night before he gets paid, and rejoiced. He made himself a nice dinner and treated himself to a drink. Thomas was really excited, and ...

This is a really good poem! I don't have much to offer you in the way of revisions, just fix your grammar in a few places. You could also experiment ...

Thanks for taking the time to review my work! I will definitely try to start focusing on my structure more. I really want it to have a title but I ...