Juniper

Quick note: Should be rated R for F-word content.

My final poem! Gah, I read up on the history of my town and began to hate it, so I'm having great trouble writing anything nice about it. Portrait The ...

A/N: A very, very cheesy poem, I know. I actually started writing this when I was twelve and because it was boring, I neglected it. I still don't like it, ...

A/N: Eh, this has to be my least favorite poem ever; it's unrhymed, unstructured, free formed and just overall ugly. It was intended to be about the city people who ...

A/N: This was "supposed" to be prose poetry, but I have no idea what it turned out as. Writing "mainstreet" as one uncapitalized word was entirely intentional. And! I hope ...

Hey again Jasmine! Nope, the highwayman isn't similar at all. It has a totally different theme, scheme and all, but when I read this, it somehow reminded me of it, ...

I might review this later; but for now I want to point out that the proper rating for this is "R", not PG-13 since it contains the "F" word.

Oh wow! Thanks for pointing that out! My computer scrambled everything up and I tried to fix most of it >.

Thank you so much for your critique Snoink! I really appreciate it! You actually just made my day. -has ditched this prologue for one that sounds totally opposite!-

Merci for the review Jig! Very much appreciated! I edited it and fixed the errors.

Thanks Jiggity! You're the best! I knew there was much wrong with this, but I was too frustrated to see. Thanks! I'll fix it now :) And also! Yes, the ...

Thanks andy, This was a flashback so it didnt make sense if you haven't read chps. 1-9. :wink: Madeline didn't leave! Ruby did. If I was able to be confused ...

"Peeta bread" is spelled "Pita" bread, silly slade xD.

In a flurry of pages And spaces blank ; Various stages Of works in ink . Now, I think this verse was very well worded, and created a brisk, crisp ...

No problem :) That makes more sense now, and after I finished reviewing it I hinted that from the title. Other than the line "A memory of a lovers past" ...