Juniper

Zinnia! *glomples* June here! I don't think this poem needs much on the improvement front, but I'll see what I can do to help you out. ;) Bluebirds fly through ...

Hey there Zaedi! Welcome to YWS! I'm June! YWS has a 2:1 policy rule that requests that you complete two reviews prior to posting one piece of each work you ...

Aunty Poppity! June here! Okay, when I clicked this piece, I honestly truly was not expecting much of it. I'm pretty much surprised; this is wonderful and amusing, dear. Now, ...

Hey there Hormello, welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you, adding in my comments and suggestions. However, before I do, I want to point ...

Lin gets my 500th review! *throws confetti* So, hey there, June here. I'm kind of not sure what to write here, hehe, which is sort of ridiculous. But, yes, anyway, ...

Hey hey hey Ryan! June here! (At long last) Let's begin with this, kay? Firstly, this is brilliant. Not to judge by age or educational level or anything, but this ...

Hi Papermoon! June here, and I'm going to review this poem for you, offering some suggestions and stuff you might be able to use to improve this (not that it's ...

Galerius! June here! Have I ever reviewed you before? I don't remember-- I guess my bad memory is kicking in. :P Anyway, on this piece, I cannot see why you ...

Hey Tiff! June here :) (Who reviews the chapter before the prologue, seriously? :P) Let's have a look at this :P. Thirteen years later and I still take that mentality ...

Hi there Tiff! June here to *finally* review this for you. Let's have a stab at this; corrections first, my thoughts later. “Nessa, your tables almost done.” Kelly said, coming ...

Monument! June here! I haven't read anything by you in so long, it's terrible. So, let's revise this first and then I'll give you my thoughts on it. I sat ...

I feel so bad. I really meant to review this a long, long time ago, and I didn't. I'm disappointed with myself. -_- Anyways, let's go for a shot at ...

Hey Frozen! I'm June! Welcome to YWS. :) That was... quite a poem! I fell in love with the structure at the very beginning, and you did not disappoint me ...

Hey there, June here! I'm quite disappointed in myself. I really thought I had reviewed this. :( Anyway, I'll remedy that and review this. Can I be more than I ...

Hi Erica! June here! Haha, this is totally cute. I love it! I think you did a pretty good job with this. I don't have any nitpicks or anything. If ...