Juniper

Hello, Ofir! June here! It's been quite a while since I've read your work. As for titles, I'm not sure. Maybe Justine and the Roses? I don't like Losing your ...

Good day, Jigsy! June here! As far as first impressions go, I could appreciate this piece. The first thought that came to my mind was, "Yay, morbidity" but as I ...

Interesting. :P - Kylan, As I have said about many of your poems in Yellow, this is an enjoyable poem. Unlike some of those in Yellow, there's no hesitation in ...

Hell-ooo there! I'm June! Welcome aboard the ship that is YWS! I'm going to review this for you. :) The title of this caught my eye, probably because I have ...

Hey there, Sara! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I'm going to be your critic for the moment. I usually don't do nitpicks, but there are some places here where ...

Hey there, Zaddie! Juniper here. :) Hm, let's see. I'm not too sure I can thoroughly enjoy this, for a few reasons! I think it's a little cliche. Cliches in ...

Hello there, Rosaic! June here again. :) Haha, so, the first thing I noticed about this after looking at the picture is that it's set in the wrong time of ...

Hello there, Rosey! June here. :) This needs adding on to, Rosey. I think it's a good sketch to work from, and I enjoy how there wasn't too many details ...

Kammieyaz, great poem. Tres enjoyable; I'll put a better review on this when I have a moment, but I'm in the middle of Essaying (so, what? I just made it ...

Rosey! June here! I meant to review this when you first posted it; I thought I did, but apparently not! Here we go: Blatant language - Too much of it ...

Hey there, Rosey! June here! Pardon me if I'm harsh. There are too many spaces in this that need to be filled in. You start us off with one sentence ...

Hello there, Zerkie! June here; I figured I should give you a review, since your awesomeness calls for it. :) I usually don't do nitpick-y reviews or pay attention to ...

Hey there, Tariq! Good to finally read something of yours. :) Okay! Overall, I think that this is a good poem, and there are a few things that can be ...

Hey there, Josh! I am so, so sorry for the delay on this. Seeing as you've got a fair share of critiques here, I'll try my best not to repeat ...

Mandorelute, How good to see you around here! I've missed reading your poetry, although I never comment. It's not often that I find poetry that keeps me reading after the ...