Juniper

The dramatic setting of this story with the flower narrating gives an extra romantic touch to this story. The wolf and bird signify a different type of relationship, although i ...

Well I think it has a lot of potential, there's just a bit of grammatical errors that I'll touch on :). Coden ambled over to the water hole settled beside ...

The emotion in this story is so strong, and you did brilliant on giving insight and realistic drama to the characters moods and the overall setting. I love the way ...

The poem is a good starting point, but the word "and" should never or rarely be used as a connecting word. The poem also doesn't give the reader much hint ...

I loved it! It didn't give quite the cheery feel that most spring poems do, but it gave an emotional feel! The first line of the poem didnt quite agree ...

This definitely is not written by a depressed person. Very cheerful and exciting. Brings to mind the 4th of July or New Years Eve (more so 7/4). Can't say that ...

INTERESTING! It kind of holds suspense, and pulls the reader in to find what comes next, and the reader (well, at least I) feel a slight twinge of disappointment when ...

I love your writing style, but haha, i disagree with your opinion of fireworks. I do agree about the pollution and the bad effects, but the visual effects awe me. ...

I love how you described the whale as a "mass", larger than you, but yet your companion. To me, it signifies respect and a trust for those larger than you ...

There must be more to life than this: a winter wind and withered kiss upon these frozen, sun-parched lips; just orange peel and apple pips. I love this! I have ...