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Re: An Angel's Omen
Well said Skay. I agree, except for the flow thing. I liked the flow of it. But that is just my opinion. Great job with this mi Pateessa! Your poems ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: The Cloudy Side
Other than a few grammar/spelling errors, I found nothing wrong with this piece. It was well-written, funny, sweet. Overall, I enjoyed it very much. All I can honestly say about ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: The Angelic Catalogues of Celestial Despair
Oh my gosh Pateessa! I loved those! They were deep and emotional and just incredible to read. I know I've already read most of them, but still... they're awesome! Continue ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Somewhere Brighter
I'm not really much of a lyric person, but I really liked this one. It was charming, entertaining, and I felt a sense of loyalty after reading it. It was ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: W.A.S (Incomplete, Ending Segment)
Wow. I very much enjoyed the strong emotional touch you added to this story. I must say, that I found some grammar errors, but I tend to, so that's not ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Padawan Battle
Wow! Being a HUGE Star Wars fan, I was very impressed with this piece. I did catch a few grammar mistakes, as I tend to do. Such as, "His lightsaber ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: The Jacket
Wow! That was wonderful. I really enjoyed reading this. It was a sweet story, well-written, and simply wonderful. As I do most of the time, I did find one or ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P-- part 9
I enjoyed reading this. As I do, most of the time, I found a couple grammar and/or spelling mistakes. Considering that I read this before I read your other works, ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Little Bird
Awesome Adriana! This poem definitely made me think, it made me question a few things, it was really powerful. And that's how a poem should be. In my opinion. They ...
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: Mud
Wow! That was an amazing work. I congratulate and compliment you on a wonderful job. I did catch a few grammar errors, as I often do. Also, besides being covered ...
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: Are They Really Who You Think They Are?
This is definitely a classic tale. I honestly enjoyed it very much. As I've told a few others, I did notice a couple spelling errors. I understand that some of ...
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: Dark Wrath: Chapter Two
I really, really liked this one Soul. Though I did catch some grammar mistakes, (as you should know that I do) I enjoyed it very much. Perhaps it is because ...
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: The Bus Stop
Well, I must congratulate you on a very nice piece of work. However, I have noticed that there are a few grammar mistakes, which, if you knew me, you'd know ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Footprints On The Beach: Part One
I really like this work, HereBeMonsters. Though I'm a bit confused in the fact that I don't know who some of your characters are. I've been told this same thing. ...
Sep 15, 2011