JoytheBrave

Thank you for the review! I agree that this piece needs more emotion and detail, though I hadn't noticed before you said it. This review was really helpful. Thank you ...

I get what you're saying about the mirror. I do think that it is a unique enough way of doing it that it works. And now that I see you're ...

Thanks! : )

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Your suggestions really helped me. Thank you! Joy

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Thanks Caterpickle. You review really well for only your second time! Kudos! This was really helpful. Thanks again, Joy

Thank you for the review, Danny. You're input was/is really helpful to me. I'll be looking at the places you've mentioned and see what I can do to make them ...

Thank you so much Questio! It's always hard for me to know how much I'm actually getting across to the reader, so your review was really helpful. I'm glad you ...

Thanks for the review, Kat! It was extremely helpful; one of the most helpful reviews I've received. So thanks again! :)

I love the creativity! Especially the pillercatters. :) Towards the beginning this felt exactly like a fairytale. One that would be told to children with wide eyes snuggled up near ...

Yeah, commas. I don't EVER know what to do with them. :) Do you have any go-to rules I could use? Or do you have time to help me correct ...

Commas are my greatest enemy! I never know what to do with them! OK, so, rant over. Thanks for reviewing!

Hey, yeah that works! Now that I see what you were trying to accomplish I totally get it!