Joyfulnoise

Hello, welcome to YWS! I liked your peice as a whole, and it made me actually read it, instead of the barely skimming over words like I usually do. I ...

I like this peice, and I agree it has the ring of traditional fairytales. It made me think back to my old Grimm's Fairy Tales that I read so much ...

Hey, great poem! This really connected with me because I used to be quite shy. You really captured the feeling well, bringing me back to those (unpleasant) days when I ...

Very interesting story! I liked the dialogue because you used authentic voices, which made the entire scene seem much more real. The beginning (running through the forest away from an ...