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Thank you so much, really! I am aglow with all of this praise! And thank you for your comments, I will definitely take them into account.

Thank you, really! I don't really get what you mean by I separated with a ")". Could you explain that a bit?

I will definitely take your suggestions into account. Thank you so much for this!

Heyo! This isn't a review, as you could probably tell. Just wanted to say this looks good, and dang, this isn't edited?! You are good. I like the tone of ...

Thank you! I don't really know the Damocles sword, but it sounds cool. Thank you for this review, really!

Thank you so much. Really.

Thank you, really. I'll try developing that other perspective. This is an amazing review, thank you!

Actually... I might not do stanzas. I personally just like it without the separation. If others say that I need stanzas, I'll add them. I just kind of like how ...

Thank you for this feedback! I'll splinter this into stanzas. Any specific points where wording could be stronger? Or is all of it meant to be stronger?

Thank you so, so much! Really!

Ah, yes. I completely understand that. It's just that after each line in a poem usually you capitalize the line, no matter the punctuation. If you look at The Raven ...

I know you're not trying to write a real story with this. But honestly, if you wanted to, I think you could.

Shoot, I just read this over and I feel like a douchebag. I'm really, really sorry for slamming you. Don't feel discouraged, please! *insert loudest sigh in the world plus ...

Thank you so, so much! I was not expecting this review! Thank you for your advice, I am definitely going to take it. And thank you for interpreting the symbols--honestly, ...