Jony

Wow, thank you for the amazing review! This is exactly what I wanted in a review when I posted this on YWS. I get everything your saying and I will ...

Would you please separate your paragraphs so it's not just one big block of text? It makes your work a lot easier to read and makes it easier to review ...

Wow, thanks for the awesome review! I'm glad you said something about the emotion because, when I reread the first chapter today, I did think it seemed a little stiff. ...

Hey, thanks for the review and I will take all your suggestions. I'm glad you told me about the rule of capitalizing the first letter of a quotation after a ...

Hey, thanks for the awesome review and I see what you mean by punctuation. In the first stanza, I used an anapestic trimeter, so each line has three anapests and ...

Hey thanks for the review! I will try to use some different/more descriptive words. Also thanks for telling me I repeated the word fog a lot.

I'm sorry, I wanted to review your work, but I can't seem to get through it. Please separate this into paragraphs, it will make it easier to review and more ...

Okay, I don't think I'm going to continue this piece of work. I guess (like most of my work) it was more of an experiment if anything. I was bored ...

Thanks, if you liked this then read my novel titled Yank. I appreciate your feedback.

Wow, I never expected such a big feedback. To tell you the truth I had no idea what I was doing when I wrote this, I am new to poetry ...

Thanks! I just went through your comment and made revisions as I read through. I respect you so much in terms of grammar. I am learning SO much about grammar ...

Ignore the last part of my comment, there are actually 2 ... in the second chapter.

Thanks for commenting! I'm going to fix those grammatical mistakes soon. The first part was just to set plot, what the stories about, ext... read the second part, its much ...

Thanks for reviewing! I'm not much of a poet, this is my first poem as you can tell and I just wanted to try it out as an experiment. As ...

Wow thanks, I love your reviews and how instead of just focusing on grammatical mistakes, you focus on the writing itself and what you like or how the author could ...