Jony

I think this is a good story so far, I have nothing really to say in terms of criticism that hasn't already been said. I think this has an interesting ...

Great! I love your style of sarcastic humor, I think this is a creative and great plot that leaves me wanting more. I think your style of writing is great ...

Nice, I like the intro the best, I think that it doesn't just suddenly dump loads of info on the reader and adds a bit of mystery to the story, ...

Hey, this has a lot of potential. I like the Greek mythology influence and having read Mythology by Edith Hamilton and the entire Percy Jackson series I think Greek mythology ...