JonQuill

Oopsie daisy!

I don't really have any criticisms, other than what has already been stated, so I'll just say that I really enjoyed this, and am quite curious as to where you're ...

I just liked this one like because it reminds me of some song lyrics that may or may not inspire you when you add more to this; "I know a ...

This, I love this. So beautiful, you didn't do what a lot of people do when they write historical fiction; bore the reader. Well done!

I like how you've written this. It's always been an opinion of mine that worrying about grammar, spelling etc. can stop you from saying what you really want to say. ...

Thanks man, your advice was really good! I guess this is why it's good to have other people read your work, huh?

Thanks for the feedback :) Yeah, I thought it might sound a bit harsh the bit where he wants to poison families, but yeah, it wasn't my intention to make ...

Thanks, I've taken you're advice with the last sentence, I just really wanted to include it, but couldn't find anywhere! Oh well, next bit then I suppose. I've always had ...