Jon

like every one else that has responded, i don't know much about limericks either. from what i read it is OK but at the end where it says " he ...

this was a very good poem, and the ending was great, dare i say phenomonal? this poem although good had some error, here they are : in the third stanza ...

i liked what you wrote but ( here comes the critisizing ) um, it was a little random and all over the place with rome, paris, new york, and florida. ...

this was a very sloppy mess, oh and wacth your language!!!!!!! i would consider re-doing this little article,it didn't seem like you put much time or effort into it, are ...

[quote]Before him people had mistaken her for my older sister. you should have a comma after him a couple of lines down you us came it should be come over ...

i read it twice to get the understanding of it but to make it moe clear the first time you should go back and change a couple of words. I ...