Jokaly

Shoes The poem is about people doing such good deeds, like helping other people. I noticed that they do all these even if their "shoes" are not clean and strong. ...

God Lights Its creative for you to think that characters call the fireworks, god lights. The kids find a way to see these interesting lights that come out from the ...

CreativelyWritten! An interesting story. The title was a grabber, when you think of "the monster". The creativity of making it seem like the monster was someone else was amazing. However, ...

Strange! Your poem was unpredictable. Reading the first lines created a suspense feeling and then there was that funny twist, the facebook status. It was very smart and playful for ...

defiantAuthoress! Your poem's very simple. It was carefully written. It describes a girl who acts like a drama queen. She goes through all the relating girl experiences of ones who ...

Timmyjake! Wow! Your poem is beautiful. Its full of thoughts that make me reflect. Its like you were actually talking to me that time that I was reading it. The ...

Purple! Your poem's nice. I like the way you describe the person. You put feelings at the same time using good words. the rhymes and choice of words really make ...

I like this poem! I enjoyed reading it with that kind of rhythm. I also liked the message of course, it reminds me of my feelings. Sometimes we are not ...