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John Locke

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Howl - Chapter 6

    I love your novel, my friend. I can't wait to read more!

    Sun Jan 05, 2014 5:17 am
  • Short Story » Horror, Science Fiction Re: The Nightmare

    Thank you for reading, my friend!

    Sat Jan 04, 2014 7:27 am
  • Short Story » Horror, Science Fiction Re: The Nightmare

    Thank you for taking the time to read this, my friend!

    Sat Jan 04, 2014 7:27 am
  • Short Story » Horror, Science Fiction Re: The Nightmare

    Thank you for reading! I know that it was confusing, but I was only trying to reflect my nightmare's own confusion. I think, once I turn it into a novel ...

    Sat Jan 04, 2014 7:26 am
  • Short Story » Horror, Science Fiction Re: The Nightmare

    Thank you for reading, my friend! I was considering turning what I saw into a novel and have this particular piece become the ending.

    Fri Jan 03, 2014 11:33 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Internal Battleground

    It was fantastic, my friend!

    Fri Jan 03, 2014 6:41 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Fragile

    Great poem, my friend.

    Fri Jan 03, 2014 6:40 pm
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: All This Time Part 1 of 2

    Ah, no. I get that sometimes, though. It's the philosopher. And amazing story!

    Fri Jan 03, 2014 6:39 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Ignore

    It was a great read, my friend!

    Fri Jan 03, 2014 6:38 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Internal Battleground

    Hello, my friend. First, I honestly have nothing to critique about this poem. I only wished to tell you something: I felt as though I was reading my own thoughts. ...

    Fri Jan 03, 2014 6:37 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Trials of Divinity

    Thank you so much for the review, my friend! I will take all that you said into my editing process.

    Fri Jan 03, 2014 6:18 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: *deleted*

    I just reread it, my friend. I think you have done a fantastic job. If you ever feel insecure about your writing, message me and I will show you why ...

    Fri Jan 03, 2014 5:46 am
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Mad World

    Please do, my friend!

    Fri Jan 03, 2014 4:14 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Howl - Chapter 4

    Your writing is fantastic. I can't wait to read more.

    Wed Jan 01, 2014 6:36 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Howl - Chapter 4

    I'm sorry if I confused you. I just meant to say that, even if a story is fantasy, it still has to be believable in its own little universe.

    Wed Jan 01, 2014 6:24 am


Go and make interesting mistakes, make amazing mistakes, make glorious and fantastic mistakes. Break rules. Leave the world more interesting for your being here.
— Neil Gaiman