Johannah

Hey! Overall, this was a good poem, but there were a few areas that just didn't flow well. I realize that this is poetry, but there are still various ways ...

Great job on this! I really enjoyed how your style here is so free. What drew me the most into this poem, was how it came across to me as ...

...Where to start.. Okay, this was extremely well written. You used some amazing descriptive words and phrases. It really drew me in, and then I reached the end... It also ...

That was great! I loved how accurate these descriptions seem to be, and how they hit head on. Of course they are meant to apply to relationships with those here ...

Maybe I'm just not reading it right, but in your first stanza, shouldn't it say: "The words that came out of your mouth, ARE filled with venomous words?" Other than ...

Wow, great poem! The thing I love about poetry is how much emotion can be packed into so few words, and for the most part, you did a good job ...

Hey! So, like several of the other viewers out there, I really enjoyed the first part of this poem. The deep and personal feelings that are drawn from the fist ...

Apparently my review is only valid if I type out 4 sentences of a length that this website deems appropriate? So here, goes. I love this part: “Great! I want ...