JohannaPomeray

Very over the top mystery. I got the idea from being very tired and studying Grail Mythology ( The Fisher King is a major figure in the story of the ...

danke danke! It is very obfuscated. In a way that was intentional. It's very modernist in that I don't honestly want onyone to have too clear of a reading. The ...

( also, your use of line and enjambment is perfect! It breaks up the phrases like the waves of the sea on a shore, and leaves me guessing just long ...

All noted and internalized although ( I shudder to admit ) most of these choices were intentional. I wanted there to be an overbearing presence of the gold to show ...

Happy review day to you as well! I will work on the format. ( Dankesha

oh thank you so much. Your kindness is inspiring in itself :3. I will certainly keep writing! Thank you!

Thank you Thank you! I see what you are saying. I tend to avoid messing with format for that reason. Maybe if I right align all the text, it would ...

Thank you so much! This did help, even if just for future pieces- it gives me an idea of what works! Also , its very flattering :3 Thank you!

it's really amazing for something just happening! you should do that more! A Cinquaine is just a stanza with five lines, which you always used. I like it a lot.