Joeducktape

Thanks! Remember when it says it turns bright red during the emergency? I figured that would explain.... The thought at the beginning is just something I thought would start it ...

Awesome! Sounds like me at a rock concert!

*claps excessively* This was wonderfully creative. Great work Dream Deep! Such hilarious imagery pops up when you read.

This is a plot I haven't read. It's good! Please continue.

INSPIRATIONAL! OR... at least.... perspirational.

Holy Crap! I'm on FotR. So far I'm at page thirteen........ of the PROLOGUE.

Erethror, I'm off to read FotR... and I think I'll do my reread of HBP after that.

...... Man I'm more screwed up than I thought. *runs off to apologize to about 3000 people*

Very good! Kept me interesting. Definitely continue this. I especially like that you remind me of my own writing! Wait. I take that back. I shan't insult you.

You haven't really given us anything to read yet! Its only a couple paragraphs. In order to decide on whether or not we like the story, we need to know ...

Yeah Kay! Post more!

I thought it was fantastic! Very good read, and you made the characters very real. Please continue it!

Very cool. If it wasn't 11:30 at night and I wasn't so tired I'd critique, but very cool.

No prob, Bob... Er... Niamh.

It was brilliant! I loved it. It wasn't too mushy. I could totally imagine this in real life. I love Napoleon Dynamite, so the quote was hilarious to me. Great ...