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Re: Passion And Thorns
Hi GeeLyria! Simple, yet pretty poem :) I like it! I like how you repeat the word passion in consecutive lines, as well as the word respect in the last ...
Mar 5, 2013 -
Re: Untitled, please help!
Forgot to add this in my last review. Titles! 1. Beyond Resurrection 2. When Time Crumbles 3. Void etc. Try to make the title contain some hidden symbolism. Keep it ...
Mar 5, 2013 -
Re: Untitled, please help!
Hi Nargles! I read the book a few months ago. Powerful story, Ray Bradbury is just an amazing writer. I like your poem a lot. I think it really does ...
Mar 5, 2013 -
Re: Time
Wow, I want to start by saying that I really like your style. Very unique. The phrase that you repeat with a different subject each time is really powerful and ...
Mar 4, 2013 -
Re: Debate of a bad dog.
Very humorous :) Nice story. Clear, to the point, and well-stated. Could have grabbed my attention more at some parts, when it seemed you were simply restating what you said ...
Feb 20, 2013 -
Re: Where?
The style of writing is very appealing. I like how your word choice leaves the reader with a sort of vague, mysterious feeling. The piece sets a very interesting tone. ...
Feb 20, 2013