Jiggity

Incase you were wondering: I reposted this because its not finished. There's more to add and now I have something to add to.

The quick weather change was deliberate/ will be elaborated on as the story continues. Thanks for the comment. Much appreciated.

Lol, this is an old poem y'all. I'm none too fond of it, but thanks again for commenting.

Cute.

Poopi. What the ***** is this? (self-censored) This story-thing-majiggy is...out of control! I dont even know what it is anymore...its long since spiralled out of the Wonderful World of Random ...

Thanks a lot, all. I appreciate your comments, they are always welcome.

That made no sense whatsoever to me. Just say 'I do/nt like it' next time, sheesh.

If the poet is "away from...the wants of society" what is s/he yearning to be free from? first off, thanks for the comment Bubbles, I'll look into and tweak some ...

High praise, from both of you, for which I thank you. Bein a tentative writer of poetry--this is after all, only my second poem--this encouragement is very helpful and very ...

That was obscure and...disjointed. Oh yeah, and really confusing. Not much to say other then that, and, how is it related to the title? Anyway, Only through persistence shall we ...

Ah, amusing is the only that comes to mind here, and my my you are unning out of ideas, arent you griffy. Still, it was funny and thats your purpose ...

Thats a big accolade which I probably dont deserve but I thank you nonetheless. Its much appreciated. Cheers.

Whilst I prefer the first 2 comments, I do appreciate yours, thank you. I'll try and do as you said and we shall see what emerges. The façade is crumbling, ...

Thank you. This is just something I felt needed to be expressed. It is infact entirely true. But again, thank you for your comments.

Lol, that was the idea. And the main character(s) hasnt been introduced yet. That was the prologue. Other people featuring, so far, in this epic battle for the world: fishr ...