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What came before wasn't the focus, nor is it, I think necessary. Its omission is meant to make you think about it, yes, but feel? I don't know if that ...

Her job, I thought, was to sing for the dead. Like Death's own professional mourner; its a nice thought, lol. I think, also, that the plot will somehow revolve around ...

Excellent, thanks a lot for the comments! Tri, im glad you picked up on the saying little to emphasise what was left unsaid thing. This was, and I think all ...

WOO! A response! Lol, thanks a lot Loony, tis appreciated. And um, obviously its not finished so dont go anywhere. Seriously, dont move. *glares*

This is just the beginning...lol, brought on by a recent television screening of the movie... left me thinking about the Real Matilda, rather the fairytale, and what happened to this ...

I too, am uber fucking confused. I didn't even know the two were related, Ch and Pro that is. Caught me off guard. But whatever, this in particular I thought, ...

... Right. Lol, thanks a lot Adam, and to all the others for taking the time to comment. Tis appreciated.

Too true Crysi, but then, I wasn't trying to make it as good, as you said, just a writing excercise. Thanks for commenting!

Erm, I still haven't found out if this won or got any recognition in that competition I entered it into. Wish me luck ppl.

This is part two of my earlier story Gods. If you haven't read that then you wont get this, in fact I'm surprised you read it all lol. I didn't ...

Yes well, I never implied that his insanity was linked to his religious orientation. And I dispute your "its not funny" comment, its actually quite hilarious but then things of ...

Lol, yes indeed, I have tried my hand at poetry once more. I'm not terribly good, which is, I think, the reason I keep coming back. Not being good at ...

Whoa. That is awesome. Plain and simple. Only thing I could see, was 'the trump of God resounds' I think thats meant to be trumpet. Nevertheless, this was just awesome.

Cheers Wiggy, glad you liked it.

Hahaha, thank you all. Undoubtedly Impy, your correct, with more precision and etc it might be more funny, I'm not sure if i'm too concerned about that though. Thanks Boheme, ...