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Yay, Tri! Always preceptive; I shall look forward to that. Thanks for the review Luna. It's always good to know my powers to disturb are still strong, even in such ...

Blah. I need more reviews because I'm too lazy at the moment to rigorously revise this (which I'm on the verge of doing). *pokes thread* Awaken!

Tsk, tsk, Razor, this isn't a story for your delicate ears, LOL. I be's good. Thanks a bunch for the crit! Wee. I like that you felt it was intense; ...

I shall take that point into account, Penguin, thanks. Heh, I appreciate the comment. Cheers

I will take this off soon methinks, to spur me on in the writing of the original. Cheers.

Um, okay...thanks I guess. Lol, in the original version I cut the vision altogether.

The train sped along, creaking and rattling. It was a typical day, freezing, obscenely early and I was surrounded by people just as disaffected and irritated as I was. I ...

Ah, thank you very much DD. Your comment is much appreciated.

Lol, sequels are always the problem, no? I'm glad you liked the piece, thanks for commenting. I just kinda assumed people would know what a Molotov cocktail was, and working ...

Thanks for the crit ^_^ Delayed commenting I know, haha. I'm still deeply unhappy with this unhappy piece though; I don't think I'll be toying with my style in such ...

Kudos to you Kayleigh, on a job well done, given that you've managed to convey a scene so well despite never having been there; Sydney girl that you are. I ...

Ah, thank you very much good sir. This is a flash fiction piece for a flash fiction contest lol, as held by Trident. So, no, there isn't an add on ...

Zomg. There was another book? After the third and there's a further one after that due out soon?! I hadn't known... I must say I'm amazed. I usually know everything ...

The concept of the story is very much tied to the idea of the Flaneur and Edgar Allen Poe's 'Man of the Crowd.' I'd have loved to left it at ...

Lol, spanke very much Chandni. I blame the dictatorial Microsoft Word for the capitalization thingo; forgot to change it :wink: Cheers