Jiggity

It took me about a minute to write. I actually wrote it while jogging on a treadmill at the gym - had to grab my phone in a hurry to ...

Haha, no, that's not quite what I was looking for, and I don't really like what you did with those stanzas either :P Flow is pretty ephemeral, I agree, but ...

You know, I missed the 'falls' repetition. Not sure what to make of that but I'm leaving it for now. Will be working on it some more, kind of experimenting ...

Hey hey! That was a rather well-written review. Well done! I agree with some points, and not-so much with others, but I'll bear it all in mind. Thanks very much ...

Interesting. I will think on this! I brain-farted this one out while at work (I'm still at work...*sigh*) so I haven't had time yet to apply any real critical thought ...

Oh, the strikethrough didn't work: 'gravely' was supposed to have been murdered in the above review. Just in case there's any confusion :)

Oh, the strikethrough didn't work: 'gravely' was supposed to have been murdered in the above review. Just in case there's any confusion :)

Oh, the strikethrough didn't work: 'gravely' was supposed to have been murdered in the above review. Just in case there's any confusion :)

Hey there, Thanks for the input. The fragment was intentional, I use them a fair bit, haha. And his audience is a mixture of ages, young and older. Not that ...

Hey there, Thanks for the input. The fragment was intentional, I use them a fair bit, haha. And his audience is a mixture of ages, young and older. Not that ...

Hey there, Kafka! Cheers for the review, buddy. I'll take it all under advisement, just thought I'd clarify a few things. "Juju" is not whimsical at all. It's a West ...

Hey Methrirr123, thanks for the comment :) This story is based on actual burial practices in Tana Toraja , Indonesia.

Meat is awesome.

...People really need to brush up on their knowledge of random myths and legends and such. Don't y'all know of Baba Yaga? Really? The witch with iron teeth and a ...

Hey there, Shepherd! First off, thanks very much for the review. It's funny that you should say you found it hard to put your finger on what was disconcerting about ...