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I really enjoyed this. Surprisingly enough, its not about griffins, although undoubtedly they'll make an appearance. And I have never wanted to be apart of the non-existent SPEW, as much ...

I'll agree with everything said. Also, dont use brackets to impart anything in any story. Okay, fit it into the story if you must. Otherwise dont do it. There were ...

This was good, very good. One prob. Which was good, seeing as how he only had one living relative left Take out the 'how' in this sentence. It's unnecessary, drags ...

This was well written, thats for sure. A couple of things though: is this ment to take off from where the book left it?, because if so there are some ...

I liked this short yet interesting piece. There were only a couple of things which I noticed: silohette You say this twice and it is misspelt both times. silhouette The ...

Wow. I liked it, it was a bit long however. You should defintely think about spaces between dialogue, it seems messy otherwise. Also, spaces should be used for effect. eg. ...

Pipe down Adam. This was well written, bravo to you for some exceptional writing. However, it could be vastly improved. For instance you make reference to other worlds (which by ...

It was, for the most part, well written. At times it was easy to see that you rushed, so perhaps you should go back, go slowly through it and revise ...

You know what's really strange? Spelling corrections that themselves need correcting. I mean honestly. Uggh. In one of your corrections you missed a mistake, how did that happen? The advisor ...

Wowity wowity wowity wow. That was extroadinary. Your an excellent writer, but, thankfully not perfect. I found some errors. The next handhold was just above it his left hand and ...

Holy ****. I honestly have difficulty believing your 14. It just doesnt fit in with this level of writing; your a prodigal talent. This is...wow. I liked it, no, I ...

Whoa. Bravo, this is an exceptional piece; quite freaky actually. I have a couple of questions though, what happened to Alex? You just left that part out, I mean there ...

You are really obsessed with Gryphons, that can be slightly off-putting. No, not off-putting, more like; repetitive. Maybe you should do more with your stories then just write about Gryphons. ...

I think this belongs in Romantic Fiction. I wondered all the time what I was that I had earned your love This is an awkward sentence, doesn't really make sense. ...

Lol, its all right I s'pose, so long as it doesn't continue. What challenge? Where? For who??? I want a challenge!! Anywho: large puddles emerged from under his eyelids puddles? ...