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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Dream

    Hallå! This was pretty great! I wasn't sure going into it if I'd dig the story, but what elevated the piece to me—what kept me interested and made me really ...

    Jun 8, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Moving On

    Hallå! Sooo, this was interesting. To me, it reads more like flash fiction than poetry, but then again, my knowledge of poetry is woefully limited, so what do I know? ...

    Jun 8, 2018
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Realistic Re: once upon a time in havana part 1

    Hallå! Are you ready for a totally serious review of your totally serious literary work?! I sure am! First off, let's talk about that title. "Through Frank Sinatra s eyes"—I'll ...

    Jun 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Alfstan

    Hallå! I must say, this is quite the impressive piece you have here. The most professional bit of writing I've read on the site so far. It's nicely plotted and ...

    Jun 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Running

    Hallå! I like this. It's a fun little read: nostalgic/sentimental, with solid imagery and a simple enough idea to be rendered effectively in a compact piece. It kept me interested. ...

    Jun 6, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: Ecliptic: Episode One - Streetlight [WIP]

    Hallå! This is certainly an intriguing premise you've got here. A cocaine dealer from outer space—now I've heard of everything. The piece itself is a bit rough around the edges, ...

    Jun 6, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Whats Beyond the Sea?

    Hallå! This was cute! I feel like it'd make a really good children's book, especially if it had some illustrations to accompany it. It reminded me of stories I'd read ...

    Jun 6, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: ugh

    Hallå! This was interesting. I liked the charm imbued in the writing and the story. The strange quirkiness of it all kept me curious. It was at its best with ...

    Jun 5, 2018


The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time.
— Mark Twain