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Re: Dream
Hallå! This was pretty great! I wasn't sure going into it if I'd dig the story, but what elevated the piece to me—what kept me interested and made me really ...
Jun 8, 2018 -
Re: Moving On
Hallå! Sooo, this was interesting. To me, it reads more like flash fiction than poetry, but then again, my knowledge of poetry is woefully limited, so what do I know? ...
Jun 8, 2018 -
Re: once upon a time in havana part 1
Hallå! Are you ready for a totally serious review of your totally serious literary work?! I sure am! First off, let's talk about that title. "Through Frank Sinatra s eyes"—I'll ...
Jun 7, 2018 -
Re: Alfstan
Hallå! I must say, this is quite the impressive piece you have here. The most professional bit of writing I've read on the site so far. It's nicely plotted and ...
Jun 7, 2018 -
Re: Running
Hallå! I like this. It's a fun little read: nostalgic/sentimental, with solid imagery and a simple enough idea to be rendered effectively in a compact piece. It kept me interested. ...
Jun 6, 2018 -
Re: Ecliptic: Episode One - Streetlight [WIP]
Hallå! This is certainly an intriguing premise you've got here. A cocaine dealer from outer space—now I've heard of everything. The piece itself is a bit rough around the edges, ...
Jun 6, 2018 -
Re: Whats Beyond the Sea?
Hallå! This was cute! I feel like it'd make a really good children's book, especially if it had some illustrations to accompany it. It reminded me of stories I'd read ...
Jun 6, 2018 -
Re: ugh
Hallå! This was interesting. I liked the charm imbued in the writing and the story. The strange quirkiness of it all kept me curious. It was at its best with ...
Jun 5, 2018
