Jetpack

Hey, Jet here. This'll be a fast review 'cause it's quite late where I am, but I'd like to give you a bit of feedback. Your title is amazing, by ...

Hey, Faust. I think you and your MC were right; you told the story and I'm fairly sure I didn't understand. I'm also confused as to why this is sitting ...

Hey there, TOYF. Welcome to YWS, by the way. I'll give you a general review, as your grammar's sensible enough. You should think about varying your sentence structure. Nike calls ...

Well, as it's a PDF, it's fairly difficult for me to nitpick this. I'll just have to give you a general review, but you'll get a more specific kind of ...

Hi, Elinor. I've not seen this before, so I'll try to give you a fresh perspective. Nitpicks It seems as only moments ago I had laid my head down on ...

Jet here for a quick review! I've read this a few times through, but I'll nitpick first rather than giving my impressions, as you've not had many language-related crits yet. ...

Welcome to YWS, Quote. Nice username, by the way. I'm Jet, here to review this for you. I was going to nitpick, but your grammar's pretty much spot on, so ...

Hey! I'm Jet, here for a sci-fi review at last. It seems like you have an interesting story building here, and if your title's anything to go by it looks ...

Hey there, Jet here for a review. I'm not going to comment specifically on the plot here, since it's not really the focus of the piece. Instead, I'll refer to ...

I agree entirely with the above reviewer, but thought I'd comment just in case you needed a second opinion. All of this information has been dumped on us without ado. ...

Hi! I'll review your edited version, because there's always a few nitpicks that need picking up on. Sometimes life can feel as though you are trapped underwater, but I believed, ...

This is a great idea. I'll give you a quick review, because there isn't all that much to say. Don't sacrifice fluidity or interest for your narrator's voice. I think ...

Here as requested, so I'll get straight to it. I agree entirely with the first reviewer on the awkwardness of the opening. It's not all that interesting to read, either, ...

Hey, I'm Jet. I clicked on this primarily because it has the same name as a Linkin Park song, which seems odd. Was that intentional? Anyway, I'm not really sure ...

Hi, I'm Jet, and welcome to YWS! In future, before you post work, spell check it first. The title should be, "The Apocalypse: Prologue", and that spelling of apocalypse applies ...