Jessa

Hey guys thanks for your feedback. I was aware of the movie/book "Dear John" but when I wrote this I completely forgot the book and movie even existed! I was ...

Everyone, Thanks for your reviews, but this story isn't about a break is about an addiction. I will fix my spelling mistakes that were caught. If you could give me ...

Hi Des :) I loved it, brought tears to my eyes. You are going to be an amazing daddy one day. Found nothing wrong with it at all!

Hey everyone! I am getting the feeling that you all want to know more about what happened to the man in the cell, so I am going to write a ...

Thanks for the nice comments everyone! I appreciate it that you took the time to read my poem! Pokemonbragirl - Yikes! I am so happy you read this poem if ...

Thanks everyone! I just made changes to the story, I hope it reads better now. Keep the edits/comments coming!!!

Thanks for giving me more edits! I have made some more changes. Keep edits/comments coming!

Everyone, First of all, I’d like to thank you for your sympathy. It has been a rough couple of days. Also, thank you so much for your edits and comments. ...

Cupcake - Thanks for the edit, and, Im glad you liked my poem :)

Cassie --> Thank you so much for your review! It was so helpful :) I made a few of your changes, and a few others I had found. I hope ...

Thanks everyone I appreciate it! These edits/comments are exactly what I was hoping for! stargazer9927 - If this is in the wrong forum I apologize. I didn't know what to ...

Hey! This was great I loved it! What a strong way to start your posts here at YWS :) I wouldn't change anything about it. Well done, keep it up! ...

Haha you could listen to it on the radio if the person who is writing the music for it would ever finish! Lol. But I'm glad you like it! -Jessa

dregymayfield - I know love is hard to explain. That is how this started. My friend asked me what love was...and I told her I didn't know how to explain ...

Haha that review made me smile! I am really glad you liked it! I will seriously try to add more to the story...I have a few ideas of how to ...