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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Firefly's Glow

    This is such an amazing, heartflelt poem. Although I agree with Brad, some of the lines were a little cliche, I don't think it really matters, because this poeem has ...

    Jan 11, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Heartbrokens

    This poem is amazing, like all your work that I've read so far. But this time it was easier to understand, so I found it more enjoyable. Keep up the ...

    Jan 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Velocity vs Chronology

    I love this poem! I think if you added more rythm to it, it would be easier to read for the reader and istantly become more popular. But I don't ...

    Jan 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Neon Black And White

    I loved the rythm and flow of this poem, but what does it mean? To be more accurate: why did you choose to write about neon in association with wedding ...

    Jan 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Autumn Sheds

    I loved it! Especially the rythm of leaves and harmony in this stanza: Autumn breaks And sheds its leaves, Take aware the season’s welcome, Remember its brave departure. Cause autumn ...

    Jan 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Back Pains in Relation to Spinal Cords

    i loved this poem. it is beautiful! the title really seems to make sense, too. i read this poem as of about people who have wasted their lives away, who ...

    Jan 10, 2007


Half the work that is done in this world is to make things appear what they are not.
— Elias Root Beadle