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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Firefly's Glow

    This is such an amazing, heartflelt poem. Although I agree with Brad, some of the lines were a little cliche, I don't think it really matters, because this poeem has ...

    Jan 11, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Heartbrokens

    This poem is amazing, like all your work that I've read so far. But this time it was easier to understand, so I found it more enjoyable. Keep up the ...

    Jan 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Velocity vs Chronology

    I love this poem! I think if you added more rythm to it, it would be easier to read for the reader and istantly become more popular. But I don't ...

    Jan 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Neon Black And White

    I loved the rythm and flow of this poem, but what does it mean? To be more accurate: why did you choose to write about neon in association with wedding ...

    Jan 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Autumn Sheds

    I loved it! Especially the rythm of leaves and harmony in this stanza: Autumn breaks And sheds its leaves, Take aware the season’s welcome, Remember its brave departure. Cause autumn ...

    Jan 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Back Pains in Relation to Spinal Cords

    i loved this poem. it is beautiful! the title really seems to make sense, too. i read this poem as of about people who have wasted their lives away, who ...

    Jan 10, 2007


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