Jennafina

Since this is set in japan, I think the students would call Mr. Brice 'Sensei'.

Thanks everybody for the reviews! I've edited. I loved how the pixie and Savanna took themselves very seriously, but you could tell everyone else thought they were nuts. Thanks. I'm ...

The ‘Cappello Povero’ was quite crouded. The bartender, a tall, harried looking woman, was serving glasses of Italy’s famously delicious wine to a variety of happy drunks. Lillian stepped in, ...

Lol, oops, sorry. I feel evil now.

Woah! Freaky! Ness, Landon and Jonas seem posessed or something! One thing: She doesn’t have any classes with most of us. Isn't a group of four a little small to ...

'Kay. I finished! No more critiques though.

'Ragheads' and 'head' don't rhyme, they're the same word. :P What Shreik said applies to me too, lol.

Wow, Bob. That was... That was deep.. *sniff* Lol, I loved it. Using a refridgerator catastrophe as a metephor for life? Thats... Creative! :D

Um.. I heard this or something in fifth grade, sang by a bunch of strange people... But its.. um... funny... :P

Accompanied by Milan, Lillian disembarked at Formia station. Rather reluctantly, she had agreed to let him stick with her. He had reasured her, and she had no doubt; that he ...

I like that. It makes me feel like the person is numb, watching their life fly by. Maybe you should call it 'Time'? This line: Chalk white as... Confused me. ...

*irk* Does anyone care to tell me what I misspelled? I can't use the spellcheck because it corrects my Italian. Sorry, peeps...

Um... Nice. I think you have too many sylables in the second to last line, though. But I'm with you on the too much physics thing. It is 5:50 AM ...

Three days later, after fixing the clock, the radio, the DigiMap, the motor, and the phone, lopping off her hair, and helping Adam pull in two large and successful nets ...

There. I did a bunch of editing. Reyu: Thanks for all the help! I can't think of a better way ot escape, but if you have any ideas.... lol, :). ...